Artie & Stu

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Starry Night

Far away from the suburb lights
far above still are starry nights
always there in my heart
miles, years keep us apart
in slumber among the pine
together we were so fine
apology for versing in rhyme
we didn’t know any better.




Painting Palette Blue and Gray for Eugi’s Weekly Word Prompt

artiecamenzind

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8 responses to “Starry Night”

  1. Eugenia Avatar
    Eugenia

    I love poems that rhyme! Your poem is a delightful and lyrical piece. It’s always a pleasure to have you join in.

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    1. artiecamenzind Avatar
      artiecamenzind

      I value well your comments Eugi, thank you!

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  2. Rebecca Cuningham Avatar
    Rebecca Cuningham

    Very fun poem. Will you join the Fake Flamenco poetry challenge this month? It’s a mystery, in free verse.

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  3. 100 Country Trek Avatar
    100 Country Trek

    I love this poem . Thanks

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    1. artiecamenzind Avatar
      artiecamenzind

      Thank you!

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  4. Jules Avatar
    Jules

    ‘…we didn’t know any better.’
    The question is… ‘Do we know any better now?’ 🙂

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    1. artiecamenzind Avatar
      artiecamenzind

      Excellent question!

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      1. Jules Avatar
        Jules

        Some questions don’t have answers… but it is fun to ponder them 🙂

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