Artie & Stu

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Sun Stands Still

Darkness and more darkness
snow falling from gray sky
zenith to nadir
earth spun again around
candles dance warm; time’s fly.

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3 responses to “Sun Stands Still”

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    Rebecca Cuningham

    Thanks, good Flamenca. I’m really enchanted by the line “zenith to nadir”!
    I like to list the countries where poets are from – remind me of yours? Thanks, Rebecca

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      artiecamenzind

      We were raised near the Wayne State campus in Detroit.

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