Artie & Stu

all the rules of free form

Paradise

Chasing loss
seeking redemption
we once
tasted paradise
then lost
our place
following many
tiny compromises
but with
our faith
our actions
we will
live in
the light
yet more.

For Eugi’s Weekly Prompt!

artiecamenzind

, , ,
, ,

5 responses to “Paradise”

  1. -Eugenia Avatar
    -Eugenia

    Delightful and encouraging! Yes, we will live in the light again! Thank you so much for joining in.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. artiecamenzind Avatar
      artiecamenzind

      You have a welcoming place, a joy to be a part!

      Liked by 1 person

      1. -Eugenia Avatar
        -Eugenia

        Thank you for you lovely comment! 😊

        Liked by 1 person

  2. Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – Paradise – Roundup – Eugi's Causerie Avatar
    Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – Paradise – Roundup – Eugi's Causerie

    […] Paradise – Artie & Stu […]

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Dora Avatar
    Dora

    Love the hopeful note this ends on! Paradise may be lost but an eternal kingdom of light awaits.
    ~🕊Dora

    Liked by 1 person

%d bloggers like this: